Without Title
Days go by like
the passing wind
Transient and swift
yet within my
mind its as if
you never left.
Your imprint is
with me,and every
minute that
travels along side
you in the gust
brings me
closer to joy.
When it occurs
I feel you through
every vein and
every fibre.
So close yet
so far and
unknown.
posted by consise10 @ 6:53 PM
16 Comments:
At Saturday, September 02, 2006 8:42:00 PM,
Minka said…
I am first! *celebrates a bit*
I just loved the last word in this poem. Very effetcive!
and also soemthign I am relating to at this moment..."Oceans apart day after day...and I slowly go insane"
At Saturday, September 02, 2006 8:49:00 PM,
consise10 said…
Yes Minka ,and do you hear the voice on the line....? I do recall the rest of those lyrics and was absolutely taken by that huge hit.
At Sunday, September 03, 2006 5:18:00 AM,
Tim Rice said…
Touching
At Sunday, September 03, 2006 10:33:00 PM,
consise10 said…
Thanks Tim :-)
At Tuesday, September 05, 2006 10:32:00 AM,
grey matters said…
keep the faith...I have a new installment tonight.
At Wednesday, September 06, 2006 6:43:00 AM,
Jeanne said…
Anyone would think you were happy:)
At Wednesday, September 06, 2006 10:07:00 AM,
ange said…
thanx for your comment to my blog. you are 100% right about distant education. i am happy. i hope u r doing well too!
At Wednesday, September 06, 2006 7:14:00 PM,
consise10 said…
hmmm...funny that,thanks for reading Jeanne.
Great to hear ange..thankyou for dropping by!
At Wednesday, September 06, 2006 7:17:00 PM,
consise10 said…
Hey Grey thanks... I'll have to go read it soon (:-]
At Thursday, September 07, 2006 11:31:00 AM,
Åñèè§å said…
yups minka I feel the same...consise it was a great poem....
At Thursday, September 07, 2006 5:06:00 PM,
consise10 said…
Glad you like it Anessa,and thanks for dropping by :)
At Friday, September 08, 2006 8:56:00 PM,
E in Oz said…
You definitely have a way with words, Consise. :-)
At Saturday, September 09, 2006 1:59:00 PM,
consise10 said…
Thanks for reading E. :)
At Saturday, September 16, 2006 2:50:00 AM,
Autumn Storm said…
Days go by..., you captured me right there and then and didn't let go even after the end :-). I know I've told you this before, but I appreciate so the short, sharp style that runs through much of your poetry, makes every word so much louder and far-reaching. Those last 3 lines hint at a sadness many of us can relate to, that often the people closest to us are the hardest to connect to. Nice work, C, as always!
At Wednesday, September 20, 2006 10:42:00 AM,
consise10 said…
Wow! Thanks for those comments Autumn (:-)
At Wednesday, September 20, 2006 2:54:00 PM,
Autumn Storm said…
Very welcome :-) Hope you are enjoying your week.
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