Get Out..
Time flies
like a jet
soaring through
the open skies.
It's so fast
and driven
yet i remain,
almost
in a vortex...
broken....
within
a very small
and confined passage,
unchallenged
by the movement of time.
I keep it closed,
never open for view.
This is me right now just after midnight.. in desperate need of a dark cloud to over take my thoughts... and just ...
null this pain.
like a jet
soaring through
the open skies.
It's so fast
and driven
yet i remain,
almost
in a vortex...
broken....
within
a very small
and confined passage,
unchallenged
by the movement of time.
I keep it closed,
never open for view.
This is me right now just after midnight.. in desperate need of a dark cloud to over take my thoughts... and just ...
null this pain.

4 Comments:
At Thursday, September 28, 2006 12:30:00 AM,
Autumn Storm said…
So very frank, and fraught with that moment and the thoughts and emotions raging within it. A very passionate piece of writing. (As always.)
At Friday, September 29, 2006 1:11:00 PM,
consise10 said…
Thanks for your comments Autumn :-]
At Monday, October 02, 2006 3:33:00 PM,
Colleen Vesperman said…
hello concise,
That piece of your writing, like your others, was just poignant and deep, as well as so true. Thank you for your insight.
Colleen
At Tuesday, October 03, 2006 9:27:00 PM,
consise10 said…
Colleen.. thanks for reading :-]
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