Shattered
You took my heart
and shattered it.
Now like a
smashed piece
of crystal I lay
all fragmented
broken sharp edges
cause bleeding
as you try
to recover me you
also bear the pain
I have inflicted
upon you ....Its all that
fuckwit GOD`s fault..I hate him
You are all wrong.. I wish I could remember
you more clearly.. when im jaggered like this
everything is bladed sharp and obtuse...
and shattered it.
Now like a
smashed piece
of crystal I lay
all fragmented
broken sharp edges
cause bleeding
as you try
to recover me you
also bear the pain
I have inflicted
upon you ....Its all that
fuckwit GOD`s fault..I hate him
You are all wrong.. I wish I could remember
you more clearly.. when im jaggered like this
everything is bladed sharp and obtuse...
posted by consise10 @ 1:22 AM
11 Comments:
At Tuesday, January 30, 2007 9:59:00 PM,
Anonymous said…
u hate more hurting somebody or getting hurt? and what gives u more pleasure after all? there must be a consise answer.
At Thursday, February 01, 2007 8:58:00 AM,
Jeanne said…
I think it's like DNA. In each little piece is all the information to recreate (rediscover?) the whole.
At Thursday, February 01, 2007 9:00:00 AM,
Jeanne said…
And I liked the poem. Raw and heartfelt.
At Thursday, February 01, 2007 1:10:00 PM,
consise10 said…
Hey armdeco...none give me pleasure..but interesting comment, thanks for dropping by!
jeanne It can be similar to DNA i suppose. When one considers picking up all the pieces and reassigning them...thanks for your comment..:-)
At Thursday, February 01, 2007 5:59:00 PM,
Jeanne said…
I don't think you need to worry about all the pieces. Any one of them will do.
At Thursday, February 01, 2007 7:07:00 PM,
consise10 said…
I dont know why ,but your comments have made me burst out in laughter jeanne!!
At Thursday, February 01, 2007 8:19:00 PM,
Jeanne said…
Hmm. Glad to make you happy, anyway. :)
At Monday, February 05, 2007 9:21:00 AM,
Anonymous said…
This reminds me of a title of one of mine - 'shattered by the final frame'. You know I love your writing, it's honest and raw and heartfelt, but you know too, that I wish with all my heart that you will find a way past this. Maybe you should think about that, what if this were the final frame. None of us know what tomorrow brings, nothing in life is promised or owed to us, we can only hope for the best, but more than that, the road to happiness is to make the best of every situation. D, you need to find a way, you really do. I've been reading you now for about 1.5 years if I am not mistaken and I hear the pain and the tears and the wants and the needs, and I understand the fear, I really do - but you shouldn't have to bleed any longer. Hugs to you, D, x
Autumn Storm
At Monday, February 12, 2007 3:09:00 PM,
consise10 said…
You know what Autumn..i have always used the blog arena as a place to let go of things which haunt me....if it seems I haven't moved on.. at certain moments gageing from the thoughts swirling around in my mind id probably agree with you.This blog doesn't only describe the obvious issue clearly out lined at the beginning of it's inception there are some other things going on here ....but over all this blog is a 'moment' if that makes sense and just that. It by no means defines me...If it did I think I'd be dead.
Your words are warm and beautiful and a reflection of what is contained within you Autumn, thankyou for expressing them to me.
At Thursday, February 15, 2007 11:20:00 PM,
grey matters said…
con-- hi. hope you are well. posted pics from yesterday's ice storm.
powerful piece. how are you?
At Friday, February 16, 2007 10:10:00 PM,
consise10 said…
Ohh aside from all the intense sweating.. the water in the swimming pool looks like the best spot right now Grey. WOW at the blizzards of which I saw some unreal footage on the late night news down here...something I cannot even begin to imagine! I bet its harder than enduring this heat though! Cant wait to go see your pics Grey...how are you doing?
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