Duality
Your tongue... I crave
I wish i could remember
I need you
what you smelt like
can we be alone?
when you were here
Touch me pull me
right now Im roaming
grab me slam me
in a world foreign
push me then enter
from any one....alone
with friction so i feel you
Im holding on
deep inside hit that spot
clinging to these stones
vibrate my internal organs
I seem to be rolling on
until i scream
falling without brakes
pleasure and pain.
in the endless .
I wish i could remember
I need you
what you smelt like
can we be alone?
when you were here
Touch me pull me
right now Im roaming
grab me slam me
in a world foreign
push me then enter
from any one....alone
with friction so i feel you
Im holding on
deep inside hit that spot
clinging to these stones
vibrate my internal organs
I seem to be rolling on
until i scream
falling without brakes
pleasure and pain.
in the endless .
11 Comments:
At Thursday, November 02, 2006 7:34:00 AM, Autumn Storm said…
Consise10, as always, you've managed to write emotively and with passion. Raw and real, bittersweet, great.
At Thursday, November 02, 2006 12:08:00 PM, Tim Rice said…
You know how to write your emotions in a way that few other people do.
Thanks for coming by my site. It was neat to hear from you again.
At Thursday, November 02, 2006 10:23:00 PM, Jeanne said…
That spot. Exactly.
At Thursday, November 02, 2006 11:09:00 PM, consise10 said…
Thanks for reading autumn :-)
You are welcome Tim.. Ill always visit your site!
Yes Jeanne... ((((LOL)))) !!
At Friday, November 03, 2006 1:37:00 PM, grey matters said…
wow! I was blushing.
It has been awhile for me. A long long while.
Thanks for checking in. Halloween is something every kids must experience--especially here.
Grey
At Friday, November 03, 2006 2:16:00 PM, Fred said…
You always give me much to think about.
Hope all is well.
At Friday, November 03, 2006 7:05:00 PM, consise10 said…
Grey thanks, you are right about such customs and traditions,they need to be celebrated and enjoyed!
Mmmm challenging eh Fred... ;-?
At Friday, November 03, 2006 8:00:00 PM, Cie Cheesemeister said…
Always more pain than pleasure, I fear. Hopefully not for you, though.
At Friday, November 03, 2006 8:12:00 PM, consise10 said…
Its bittersweet here cheese,
thanks for dropping by and commenting..take care xxx
At Monday, November 06, 2006 5:56:00 AM, grey matters said…
a new, bitter post for bento box today! enjoy. grey
At Monday, November 06, 2006 10:15:00 AM, consise10 said…
Have just been and you have me in deep thought Grey...especially with some posts from 2004 I tapped into.
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