Layers
I'm naked and shameless
crushing myself to pieces
And just like that of
a chilli pepper... I burn
piercing these delicate eyes.
Carefully undoing these knots
and as I barely stand there tearing
you come to me in a brief flash of light.
I wipe away
the bitter toxicity
to clear the view
but you have run away
back into the bleak
darkness of the unknown
shedding all
which is non existant
in this world.
Is it better when
you know
that you are
not the only one?
To bury your self
deep within your
own confined safehell?
....sometimes I wonder...
crushing myself to pieces
And just like that of
a chilli pepper... I burn
piercing these delicate eyes.
Carefully undoing these knots
and as I barely stand there tearing
you come to me in a brief flash of light.
I wipe away
the bitter toxicity
to clear the view
but you have run away
back into the bleak
darkness of the unknown
shedding all
which is non existant
in this world.
Is it better when
you know
that you are
not the only one?
To bury your self
deep within your
own confined safehell?
....sometimes I wonder...
15 Comments:
At Saturday, August 25, 2007 3:05:00 AM, Autumn Storm said…
Hey D, sorry I haven't been around in a little while. Hope you've been keeping well.
It may be easier to be unaware, to not see what could be, what has been and what will never be, to not believe that there is another, several others, one might have or could be. To be unaware would mean not even knowing there was a better place and surely knowing even believing one will never get there has got to be better than thinking here is as far as it goes. I may btw and more than likely have completely misinterpreted your writing. :-) Either way, D, as always, your writing is felt, it is emotion, it is feeling.
At Sunday, August 26, 2007 12:16:00 AM, isay said…
Hi! i hope you are a-okay. i have been in and out.....my best regards to you.
At Wednesday, August 29, 2007 1:57:00 PM, consise10 said…
Hello autumn,thanks for your comment.To be unaware would be complete and utter bliss to have not lived a damm thing..to have not seen, to have not breathed.. pure extacy..but NOT POSSIBLE so I continue as we all do.I ve been keeping well and hope u and daughter are doing fine too .
isay thanks 4 that!
At Tuesday, September 18, 2007 6:54:00 AM, Autumn Storm said…
Hey sweetie, how are you?
At Monday, September 24, 2007 5:06:00 PM, Cie Cheesemeister said…
I'm also sorry I've been absent. Your writing is still very powerful--keep doing it!
At Thursday, September 27, 2007 12:04:00 AM, consise10 said…
Hey Autumn Im doing well thanks how are you?
Cheese thanks 4 dropping by i write as i need release it comes and goes in waves.
At Sunday, September 30, 2007 11:05:00 PM, Autumn Storm said…
I'm doing good, thanks D. :-) Hope you've enjoyed your weekend, hugs to you, x
At Friday, October 19, 2007 4:21:00 AM, Autumn Storm said…
Hey D, just passing by to leave you a hug. :-)
At Friday, November 09, 2007 1:33:00 AM, grey matters said…
con- I am back.
got dumped by a man who was looking for a rich female doctor to take care of him. so my comment page is BACK. ps--be careful, the guy who dumped me is heading down under this summer. lock your doors come July!
hope you are well.
At Saturday, December 08, 2007 9:47:00 AM, Autumn Storm said…
Happy weekend, D, hope you've been keeping well, xo
At Sunday, December 23, 2007 10:34:00 AM, Autumn Storm said…
Merry Christmas, D, to you and yours, wishing you all the best for 2008, x
At Sunday, April 13, 2008 7:16:00 PM, Autumn Storm said…
Hey D, hope you're smiling, xo
At Thursday, May 08, 2008 4:54:00 AM, Anonymous said…
you there? just posted a new one....
At Sunday, July 27, 2008 3:07:00 AM, Autumn Storm said…
xo:-)
At Sunday, August 03, 2008 12:05:00 PM, Unknown said…
It was good to see you at the Raven's Realm again. Don't know if you'll get this as it seems you haven't written here in a while but if you see it, thanks for writing!
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