FEELINGS

Tuesday, May 08, 2007

Rock

I bury my self
In the sounds
only heard in side my walls
and to that voice
that knows me best
That which i transcribe
here in words are
somewhat inadequate.

A Future waits
but not for me
and sometiems I cry
sometimes I wonder
why I need to
get out of this
compartment.
My hope is gone
and my will ...
do i still have the will ?
The will to leave it all behind
and get on with
what is present
before me now ?

Will you...
take my hand
through the fears
through the anger
through the sadness..
help me to swim
help me to be a rock?

posted by consise10 @ 10:47 PM  

14 Comments:

  • At Tuesday, May 08, 2007 11:58:00 PM, Blogger Trée said…

    Beautifully written. I feel a passion in these words that only comes from deep inside, a genuineness one cannot manufacture.

    Thanks for joining Team Bravo. I'm sure Autumn will be very, very excited when she sees you on the roster, assuming she doesn't already know. Welcome aboard Consise! :-)

     

  • At Wednesday, May 09, 2007 1:31:00 AM, Blogger Autumn Storm said…

    D, you're wonderful! I didn't know so got a very nice surprise when I just checked the team stats and saw a familiar name. :-D Thank you for joining the team, so absolutely delighted to have you with us!

    D, as always, your writing is very moving, softer today than often before, which though I have many times complimented you on the rawness of what you have written, is not a bad thing, at all. Though you write words to the contrary, there is an openess to hope within this piece I feel.

    Hope you have a very happy day ahead and thank you once again - wish you were here so I could hug you. :-)

     

  • At Wednesday, May 09, 2007 10:01:00 PM, Blogger consise10 said…

    Hello tree and Autumn..i read your blurbs on this project and felt it was too good a way to be helping with research 4 the listed diseases.Lets hope the stats rise and more folk come on board,it's a fab idea and way to get people involved where they really need do nothing but register their computers.Best of luck and hoping the project meets its targets and beyond...
    Autumn,your message here, although always warming, touches me from very far across this globe.Virtual hugs from me to you stretching and reaching u from abroad. XOXOXXO

     

  • At Thursday, May 10, 2007 2:52:00 PM, Blogger Autumn Storm said…

    Thanks, D, keeping our fingers crossed. The first week and a half has been a great success, with you joining us, we are risen to 16 members. :-)

    Have an absolutely wonderful rest of the week. More hugs back attcha. :-)

     

  • At Thursday, May 10, 2007 5:42:00 PM, Blogger consise10 said…

    Yea ..thanks autumn same 2 you too...Ive just been to the site and checked my points ..and so far none have been accumulated. I'm just wondering if i've fully installed all that needs to be installed?

     

  • At Friday, May 11, 2007 11:44:00 AM, Blogger Trée said…

    Desi, click the "view my scores" on the upper right quadrant of your primary task information template (where the stats from the device are kept on your computer). The third column down shows "my team." If Bravo is not showing there, then you will need to join Bravo so that those points will show on the Bravo roster.

     

  • At Monday, May 14, 2007 1:09:00 AM, Blogger Iain Dughlais said…

    That made me want to hug you.

     

  • At Monday, May 14, 2007 2:35:00 PM, Blogger Autumn Storm said…

    Hope you had a nice Mother's Day yesterday, D, and weekend generally. :-)

     

  • At Monday, May 14, 2007 6:02:00 PM, Blogger consise10 said…

    Thanks for the tip tree! ;-)

    autumn..thankyou XOXO How was yours?

    iain,warmly appreciated.Thankyou.

     

  • At Tuesday, May 15, 2007 1:28:00 AM, Blogger Autumn Storm said…

    Thanks for asking, D, my weekend was good. :-)

    Take care, and have a great week, xoxo

     

  • At Sunday, June 17, 2007 11:58:00 PM, Blogger Nic said…

    I just wanted to drop past and say hello and to have a read of your beautifully written works of art.

    Im sure ill hear from you soon.

    Nic

    p.s. Im sorry its been awhile.

     

  • At Saturday, June 23, 2007 12:20:00 AM, Blogger consise10 said…

    Welcome back ((((Nic))))..its great to hear from you ..and thanks for your comment ! (:-)

     

  • At Saturday, June 23, 2007 11:16:00 PM, Blogger grey matters said…

    hi con, so good to hear from you. hope all is well down under.
    grey

     

  • At Monday, June 25, 2007 11:03:00 PM, Blogger consise10 said…

    Oh ...smiles here Grey...I am fine thanks...hope u are aswell!

     

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